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RE: HOW TIME FLIES JUST THAT YOU ARE THE PILOT!

"Time is our emissary into the future to help us sow seeds into our today that we would reap tomorrow. " LOVE THIS! Wow, nice prose, some worthy thoughts and a beautiful image. Now for the critique. I think your work would take on more power with more white space on the page to frame your words.
You decide where paragraph breaks happen, I'd use more, and, if bandwidth and tech permits, some small, black and white images, in the vein of the one at the top, between them. You fulfilled the assignment nicely! A little more attention to formatting and this is a masterpiece! Nice.

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Thank you @markrmorrisjr. I will take note of those things you mentioned in my Day2 assignment.

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