DnW Poetry Contest #3: A TIME WELL SPENT

A Time Well Spent

Zairos Aguado

time is gold, no one could behold
time will fly, many might cry
as we speak, you can now see
the clock will tick, like one, two, three

as the hand of the clock make its tick and tack
chance and opportunity might end in a snap
better be wise, not to waste your time
as they will come, once in awhile

give love with every second you have
give importance to the person you love
don't make a tear flow in her eyes
this might not lead, walking in the aisle

have a second thought, with all your decisions
a woman's emotion is like a gemstone
better use your time to make her smile
and live happy together, for the rest of your life


Hope you like it
Thanks for reading

P.s My very first written poem 😊

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Nice structure and word choices. I hope you win!

hahaahahah, thanks :D I also hope :D

Great composition! @maverickinvictus, see my little borther!? See the resemblance, technology and poetry can be bridged together no matter the time, age and disposition as long as you love doing what you love and love what you are doing. Great work kid!

@jamesanity06

wahahahahahahaha just trying xD

this is a good way to release tension in coding hahaha

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