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RE: Poetsunited: Daily Dose of Poetry and Prose #102 (The Colab Edition)
Never thought I'd see my name in the same paragraph as Falkner's. Lol. Thank you for being so kind. 😎
Never thought I'd see my name in the same paragraph as Falkner's. Lol. Thank you for being so kind. 😎
I thought you created a dark, grey atmosphere; little being said, one character snoring (or dead) and the others saying little, mostly thinking except for an unceremonial action like poking at something - it really took me back to an action by one of the characters in As I lay Dying - perhaps it was Darl.. ?. Definitely a poem with existential tensions, we're left 'waiting' for an answer to arrive or to be arrived at.
Sorry I didn't see your comment until today.. hope you have a great weekend.
Thank you for your deep reading.