Hey @bankokhearts,
methodical review with appreciated anchors re: the chapters :).
Maybe one suggestion: you might also add some other competitor(s) than those mentioned by the company... like e.g. VALID.global... I don't know about all other parts of your review, but it's always (even more) big added value if a review can bring on something more than one can find oneself on the ICO's own site and whitepaper.
Greetings!
Ps Just discovered it too tx to an ad :).
Fyi: minor typo in your text: ...essential...