RE: Iagon - A Decentralised Approach To Cloud Computing and Storage
The introduction.... You could improve on the flow. When writing, remove the constraints... Any distractions, and imagine you are talking with a buddy. When you are doing that... It flows effortlessly, like a river flowing downstream. Always try to capture that when writing. Like I just listened to one of your uploads, it had a natural flow. Strive to achieve that. Gradually, you will get there and keep on growing.
Also try to read through at least twice, and then read out if you have to....to get the flow.
Before starting, ensure you really understand the center theme.. What they are trying to achieve, and ensure you try to answer ALL the questions written.
Start strongly and try to finish strongly. Like what you tried to achieve here.
With regards to @originalworks
To me, finishing 1st, 2nd 3rd, etc... It's all luck and a matter of preference. Sometimes, the article in the 4th place has better quality than that in 1st...but perhaps, the team wanted something very brief, so the seemingly better article ended up in 4th. Don't be bothered about that. 1st to 10th is all luck/preference. But finishing in the top 20 is a skill.
If you can do all that, you will easily finish in the top 30, and then gradually creep into the top 20 consistently. Just enjoy your write-ups, yourself and have fun.
And oh, in writing generally, it's always better to stick to basic words.... Easier words that everyone can understand.
Cheers, frero. À demain
Will surely take all these into consideration in my subsequent posts and hope for the best . Thanks for making out time to read and more importantly ,opening my eyes to areas requiring improvement.I appreciate champ ! :)
Always glad to help brother... Let's see how the next one goes. Tag me in the comments or wherever, when you put it up. :)
Agree with @solcross. The difference between the top spots is a matter of writing to the reader. My belief is that if one has the time to fully gauge what a client is trying to accomplish in a whitepaper, then a decently composed post has a very good chance of winning. Flash has its place, as does well written compositions, but understanding the objective seems critical for 80% percent of the sponsors.