Portal Disaster (Second Creative Writing Challenge Task #1)steemCreated with Sketch.

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This is my submission for @steemfluencer 's Second Creative Writing Challenge - Task #1.

Here is the original post of the outline for this task and it's rules.

Hope you enjoy my entry.

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Damnit! It happened again. Here I was just sitting on the bus on my way to work, and all of a sudden get transported into another damn portal. I was immediately swallowed up by that drasted thing. Within a few seconds I was transported to the Jurrasic period. I knew it well. How many times had this happened? And the same place. I always arrived in the exact same spot, standing on the edge of some nest. There was always 3 large orange colored eggs. This time was not different, except for the fact that I was in business attire and wearing heels, and apparently no longer have my bag, which had been situated beside me on the bus. Thankfully I always had my wallet tucked in my jacket pocket, but that is the 3rd copy of Gone with the Wind I have lost this month alone. I don't know if I will ever finish that book at this rate.

How long was I going to be here this time?, I thought. There was a very loud squawk above and I immediately began to run. I knew what was coming. I headed down the hill, running away from the nest, and tripped. Damn heels! I fell flat on my face. I heard another squawk but this time much much closer. I turned around to see it flying at me. I grabbed one of my heels off my foot and threw it at the creature, it didn't phase it one bit. I kept my gaze up and frantically reached around me on the ground for something to defend myself with. I picked it up and took a swing at the incoming creature, trying to ward it off. A few seconds later I was right back in the spot I had just travelled from, sitting on the bus. Shit, and my bag was gone. I hate this damn city! I tried to ignore the gazes of those around me who had just seen me reappear out of thin air. I pushed the button on the long metal pole to signal a request to get off. I looked down at my other hand which I finally realized was holding something, and in my hands was a large bone. Looks like I had a souvenior this time.

I stepped off the bus, still a good 10 blocks away from work. I decided to go to the convenience store on the corner right in front of the bus stop to get a drink. As I reached to open the glass door I saw my reflection in the window. Looking back at me was a reflection covered in dirt. There was no way I could go to work like that. I went inside and purchased a coke and requested to use the bathroom. I fixed my hair, washed off the dirt as well as I could from my face and wiped as much off of my clothes and jacket as I could with a damp paper towel. I looked down and saw bright tomato colored nail polish looking back up at me. Shit, I thought. I lost my damn shoe back there. I took off my other one and headed out barefoot out of the store in search of a last minute shopping excursion. As soon as I stepped foot on that sidewalk I felt a hard plop on the back of my head. "Oh my god! You have got to be kidding me!" I scream out. I felt the back of my hair and felt something warm and gooey. I looked at my finger. Now I was staring down at this bunch of bird crap that looked like smeared greek yogurt, but warm, on my hands. "That's it!" I say aloud. "I'm done, I give up. Not today!". I saw some gazes from around me but no one really cared. I pulled out my cell phone and dialed my work number.

"Hey Patrice", I said.
"Look, I'm not feeling too hot today, I can't come in." I almost whimpered into the phone.
She told me she understood and to get some rest. I had the most awesome boss. I hung up the phone and walked right back into the store. I went straight into the isle with the wine and picked up two bottles of whatever white wine was the cheapest. I brought it up to the counter still holding my one shoe in my hand. The cashier rung it up, and as I was about to pay I noticed some bananas beside register. I grabbed two and said "Hell, I might as well eat while I get drunk". I paid the man and headed back outside, choosing to walk the rest of the way home.

I hope you had fun reading. This was a very interesting challenge for me. I am doing this to help expand my creativity and my writing.

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Ineeed i did have fun reading, isnt it damned annoying when your going about your business and get sucked into a portal :)

Damn right it is! Like it makes you think What the damn hell?! Ha. Would be cool for like a second though. Glad you had fun reading it, it was fun writing it.

Yeah it would be fun and rehabs scary LOL

Have a great day

Nice work here for task #1! I like to see full stories written out with clever ways of integrating the task rules. Bananas and white wine though? Nasty! :)

Haha I wish I could say it was nasty...but bananas are yummy...and white wine, well if you stayed to the more dry tasting wines it wouldn't be too bad other wise it might be like sugar overload. If someone hasn't made a banana essence type of white wine I am sure it will come around one day. :P Glad you liked it, I was a bit worried but just went with it, it made me laugh cause I could see all of that happening to me (besides the portal thing though), so I had fun.

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Good job @topkpop! That was pretty unusual. It should mean that your creative muscle is well developed :)

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