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in #creative7 years ago

Well the ending was mine, and not necessarily where I had been looking to take the story. Last night I thought we just needed a good way to wrap things up.

Consider this a reimagined universe, where humanity doesn't exist to be a part of the federation perhaps.

Or maybe some small corner of the planet, humans were able to lock themselves off until the horde died from lack of food. Unlikely since they could eat the planet itself if need be.

Or... A space going human race may have already had a few ships out exploring. This makes the most sense for continuity. But then we still have to visit how they reclaim earth.

Dunno man. I just needed a good twist to tie up the story. Leave me alone! Lol

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That was so awesome.. I freaking loved the ending, so many shivers. What do you think of the text to speech? :D

I'm thinking about trying to chapter them all up at some point and making a collab'd book?

And a good twist ending it was. I really liked how you pulled it into the Star Trek universe. Perhaps one lone Borg, in a future that is completely taken over, finds emotion and goes back in time to stop the collective, but ends up as the catalyst for the Human retaking of the planet before the exodus.

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