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RE: Halloween Horror Writing Contest: Results!
I really like that photo I took. It was through hipstamatic iphone app. I'm glad you liked it.
I really like that photo I took. It was through hipstamatic iphone app. I'm glad you liked it.
It's generally frowned on. I think its harder for a reader to follow. More than anything, the format for narrative / fiction is different from the format of a script / screenwriting. Yours followed the latter.
Your ending was the most succinct part for me as a reader.
I hope I didn't come off too strongly in my response. I meant that, there were details and plot holes that made me lose my 'belief' in the story. Also, as somebody who has fired weapons before, I'm a stickler for details about guns.
thanks again for your submission!
It didn't. I truly enjoyed your feedback and opinions. It was fair in my eyes.
And, I really don't know what I'm doing so getting feedback like this is welcomed. However, next time I have crazy acrobatic, gun-slinging dude, I'm naming his Dirge. HAHA!