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RE: Beta reading contest Ragnarok Conspiracy : Final part; 30 STEEM prize money, and chance for 500SP delegated for 6 weeks.
I've commented on Chapter 8. That one was long.
A more general point that I guess I'll put here: I imagine you're unaware, but the word "Lapp" is an ethnic slur in English, directed at the Saami people of northern Norway, Sweden, and Finland. In light of that you may want to find a different name for your Lap Republic.