So the correct English for this is “We plan to airdrop 10% of the genesis tokens to holders of steem”

You should add some more details to this along the lines of:
Expected date of airdrop:
Based on the holdimgs of steem on the ... (date):
This will be accomplished as follows.... (details):

You should also describe in detail how the vice tokens will actually work in practice, both for the end users and for the content producers.

You imply from your white paper that certain members of the porn indutry are “supporting” you. Big names apparently. Can you describe in detail what this means. Did you sign any contractual agreements yet?