Heaven – my vision
Heaven – my vision
I know not what heaven is like
it must be a place filled with delight
where flowers bloom and do not fade
and butterflies roam coloring the place
rivers flow with gentle rhythms
birds tweet songs that makes you smile
there is a shine to the light
everything seems to be bright
gentle fairies of happiness
float along waving their wands
divine men in white robes
women graceful as swans
no one looks alike
every soul has a place
no one to judge
no competitions to win
no rat race to win
peace and love present
food is fresh fruit
the trees grant you what you wish
music fills the air
and the climate is pleasantly fair
heaven is a place
within your heart
when peace rules
and thoughts are far
no malice or hate
no person to abuse
love is present
it springs forth from within the heart
making the soul
stand apart
the charisma of such a person
reflects what heaven must be like
showering peace and love
even when hate is rampant
God knows to love only
He punishes not
Karma is what decides
Whether you deserve heaven or not
Life is a gift to you
so make the best of it
stay blessed always
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entry for @hartfloe contest
I found this contest from @eaglespirit entry and the prompt from @hartfloe (wow)
That's a fantastic vision you've got there.
If I were writing it, I'd probably go on and on about winged angels and rumbling thunder.
My husband always says when he gets to Heaven they are going to hand him a shovel. :D
thank you dear
This is beautiful! I love the details you focused on and how you described a peaceful loving place. I love how you explored the world, and showed how much different and wonderful Heaven is compared to here. :)
Loved these lines:
Life is a gift :) A great reminder to live life to the fullest... just in case there is no Heaven! :)
Thank you so much dear, I am so happy
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This is amazing... great work! Thank you so much for entering... I'll put my feedback on the Main Contest Page
Beautiful writing.. great to have you participating here my friend :)
With Love
Hart Floe Poet
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