I love all the stories, but the ones that are loaded with information and have a nice wrap up awe me. @felt.buzz sure pulled both of those off with this one: https://steemit.com/freewritehouse/@felt.buzz/shapshot-a-five-minute-freewrite-hyz6rvma
The emotion (that only one of them feels), the characters (miles apart while in bed), the final line (love in the 21st century)! Great story.