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RE: FLASH FICTION - Last Call For Valhalla
I love how well you use questions to draw us further into the story. Glad you chose to participate in this contest, otherwise I wouldn't have been able to read this wonderful story.
I'm glad that style worked for you. It's a lot to try to get a full story into so few words, but I felt like the questions could help lure a reader in quickly. I liked how it turned out, even though it's not my usual style.
Sometimes breaking from our usual style produces something that surprises even us. And yep, the questions sure lured me in quickly.
Mixing it up can be a great exercise for creative writers. I agree.