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RE: Dead Poems, Round 11, Contest and Community Building
Hi, @prydefoltz. Thanks for hosting #deadpoems :-)
Hi, guys!
Here, the remains of this good boy:
Hi, @prydefoltz. Thanks for hosting #deadpoems :-)
Hi, guys!
Here, the remains of this good boy:
Interesting paradox in last two verses. Especially given quite elaborate way this poem is presented.
Thanks, @bacus15. Perhaps memory is a two fold phenomena and has a life of its own. Who knows (I don't, just in case) ☻
memory leave
to live
man remains
though emptied ;)
I can feel the pressure to make a decision clearly in this piece.
Thank you for that insight, @sumayyahsaidso. Much appreciated ☻
I feel that the relationship of time within the poem is similar to a loop. There is uncertainty and let vu at the same time.
Certainly, @zeleiracordero, it's a good way to put it ☻
Astounding work, Marlyn:)
Thank you so much, @prydefoltz. I thought myself these were strong lines ☻
Well penned. Time and life move on, carrying us in it’s eddies whether we will it or not.