Excellent! You've provided an excellent challenge, as well as extending your audience beyond steemit to reach your Twitter followers as well, good job! Cross platform promotion is some Dolphinschool 3.0 advanced stuff, nice! Also, that drum roll gif made me laugh out loud! Critique. Your headline is somewhat compelling, but could draw more readers if you told me there was a prize, and made a more emotional appeal. Your grammar is excellent, I applaud all of you writing in a second language, however, a little brushing up would go a long way to perfecting your very nice post. Nicely done, you're progressing well! I hope you get a lot of interest in your contest!
Thank you so much so so much for the feedback and the #dolphine challenge, am learning quite alot.
Like you have said yes i do need to be more catchy to the audience, 1) in choosing a great headline (i fall short of that), but seeing and reading other people's posts I can see their thought process is coming up with a headline 2)Am working on doing perfect posts, reading alot on how to write, am using grammarly in all my posts and honestyl i can see improvement.