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RE: 50 Word Micro-Fiction Competition – Win SBI Shares
This is a great idea @eveningart.. i will give it a try..
Okay here goes.. haha i hope i give justice to this! 😂🤣
THE WINDOW
Flu had gotten the whole town sick. The disease spread out so fast that it affected mostly the children and the oldies.
Olivia shifted her gaze to the window. She tried to get up. She made it to the window limping. She smiled. And slowly closes her eyes.
No don't do it Olivia! Or is she just getting some fresh air... Love the ambiguity and the hint of menace! Nice job @maquemali! Thanks for entering x
Hahaha i tried my best on this.. thank you for the opportunity