Upvote Bots: My Entry for Lymmerik's Limerick Contest #3
Hey, Lost108 here, here is my entry for Lymmerik's Limerick Contest #3
Enjoy!
Upvote bots
~ You gotta love upvote bots ~
~ They give you mighty votes ~
~ I almost book a vacation ~
~ Until I saw the curation ~
~ So I said no more bot devotes ~
I am done.
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Lol!
That's more of a rap. Totally not a limerick, but still awesome. 🙃
Check out THIS post for what a limerick is. If ya wanna. 😉
Yeah I agree, mine is advanced, next level! Lol :D
Yes. Advanced. 🤣
@cleverbot those upvote bots are ruthless nonetheless. I can attest. you know the rest
hey @lost108,
I love your enthusiasm for the contest. However you have written a poem. Please take a look at the post again and please resubmit your limerick. Even if the clock runs out, I'll still accept it. I will be judging tomorrow in the evening, my time here in Arizona, and if you get it resubmitted before I do the judging, I'll accept it. Below is the original post, it spells out the structure of a limerick. Thanks for the entry.
@Lymmerik
Original Lymmerik's Limerick Contest #3
Hey @lymmerik sorry I am new and this is my first lymmerik contest haha :))
I have edited my submition, could you please check? :)
@lost108,
much better, but...
~ You gotta love upvote bots ~ line 1, 2 & 5 have to rhyme
~ They give you mighty votes ~line 1, 2 & 5 have to rhyme
~ So I put them on my notes ~line 3 & 4 have to rhyme
~ I almost book a vacation ~ line 3 & 4 have to rhyme
~ Until I saw the curation ~line 1, 2 & 5 have to rhyme
thanks for bearing with me on this, the lines above are just off a bit. Limericks are hard, here is a limerick I wrote not long ago.
The Habit of Smoke
Once lived a man with the habit of smoke,
He'd cough and he'd laugh and sometimes he's choke,
He said he could quit,
Every time that he lit,
So on lived the man with the habit of toke!
look at the structure and count the syllables see how lines 1,2&5 rhyme and lines 3 &4 rhyme. There is a definite rhythm to a limerick.
Thanks for understanding, I wish you success in limerick writing!
Thanks again
@Lymmerik
Sorry one more time, I must have given you a headache :D
I have edited, now I think I got it right? :D
@lost108,
There you have it! no headaches, limericks are tricky!
Thanks for the entry
@Lymmerik
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