You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Weekly redfish / Newbie mixer and SBD giveawayView the full contextlildebbie (44)in #contest • 7 years ago Burn is a free form poem about fire, in more than one sense.
I like all of the descriptors that you use, they really brought the intensity of the fire to life. The motivation for starting the fire was very clear and I can't help but side with your protagonist!
I always have liked that one. You should post more of your poetry.
I agree with @bryarose23 the scene and intent were both clear to me
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