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RE: Simplified Meme Challenge: Reviving A Failed Project
I wonder if the lack of response is confusion over what you're asking for. 10 verses, or even 5, is a lot of writing, but I think from your example, you mean 5 lines.
I'll give it a go...
Our houses are getting bigger
But our families are getting smaller
More medicines are invented
But access to healthcare is declining
Our highways are getting wider
But our mental highways are getting smaller
More information is available than we know what to do with
But we have lost the ability to be still and listen to our inner knowing
Our phones are amazing computers
But we can't get out of our own way!
Hmm, not terribly happy with that, but poetry isn't really my field of expertise. Hopefully it will at least inspire someone else to do (much) better.
Thank you for taking part. Very good effort on your part.