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RE: The Gray Cloud | micro-fiction contest by karupanocitizen

in #contest5 years ago

I agree with @kaelci, @karupanocitizen. The translation is quite good, and easy to follow. I imagined the president trying to step back in time, to prevent a disaster before it happened, only to find himself in some creepy alternate universe.

He recognized himself walking through a ghostly New York, whose streets seemed stopped in time. The restaurants were still open, although there were no diners. The traffic lights giving instructions to lit vehicles but without any passenger driver.

Well done!

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I'm very glad that the translation was good. It is really a stimulus to know that the message of history can be clearly captured by the readers. Mucchas thanks @jayna y @kaelci for the support.

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