Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #19 WINNERS!

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Hoist the colors, proud storytellers!


Mark my words: one day, when you'll less expect it, you will wake up from a nightmare and you'll see a pair of lusty popping eyes staring right at you, shining in the darkness. At that moment, you will understand that the faceless child is nothing compared to the Bananafish!
Disclaimer: this may occur in particular to those who write 2075 words in place of 500..hint hint (shining eyes)


In this edition, we've been challenged by a narration in the form of a diary, an expedient not between the easiest ones in terms of completing the story: some of you let the diary answer, some others made another character intervene, writing on it, some others made the diary become an instrument of betrayal. As usual what I care is the content more than the form.

There was this faceless child waiting right beyond the threshold of the unknown realms. This, at least, was what the old man believed and wrote, bold as brass but in reality naive like a child playing with a toy and not observing what's happening in the room. I was expecting this element to be exploited together with the occultic setup - not necessarily alchemic.. and the sentence about the vibration, heat and green color is from Gustavo Rol, an Italian medium: a mysterious and charming personality.

What's boiling in the bananafish kitchen (the news!)


  • Thank you all for your ongoing sustain!!! Even this edition @maverickinvictus gave visibility to the contest in the Steemgigs Contest Channel and @lynncoyle1, who curates for asapers, placed the contest in their channel. Then there's @steembasicincome who keeps inserting the contest between those linked to the project, thanks always @josephsavage. I'm limiting to put here some specific initiative, but you all are doing great in making this ongoing fiction workshop grow.
  • Today I'm going back to share the SBD reward since I loved all your entries.

  • @marcoriccardi thank you from the darkest corner of that pale reminiscence of soul I'm left with! Today, Marco is offering 4 of the 5 SBI in the pot. Marco will help me with some stories from the 21st edition.

  • Still, from the 21st edition, the contest will transfer to the @bananafish account, with the idea of making it the base camp of all of us storytellers. Also through some SP delegations, the aim is to make this account become a valid sustain for the contest participants.



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Alright, let's cut the chatter, brave storytellers, the winners of the 5 @steembasicincome shares are:


  • @dirge: the diary stops being a passive receptacle, it lives and offers his disenchanted perspective about how the old man is playing with something bigger than him. Everything here is authentic and convincing. He obtained this through a monologue rich of details and shades. It's enough to see the description of the child and its actions. He wins the first place with 2 SBI. Congrats to our alchemic homunculus, Dirgelius!

  • @blueteddy: an excellent and creepy description of the faceless being beyond the threshold of reality! Adding some more plot to the scene would have made it become the first place. 1 SBI for you and congratulations!

  • @maverickinvictus: he wins 1 SBI for the popular vote throwing us in a world made of alchemic transmutations, where the law of equivalent exchange reigns.. well done Edward Elric, the steel alchemist!

  • @stormlight24: this is Marco's pick and he wins 1 SBI.. well done for a first entry! A very well portrayed old man at the end of his days. What's worth all the knowledge in the world, if you loose yourself?

  • @nancybriti, @cyemela, @theironfelix, @marcoriccardi, @agmoore, @raj808: you all win the SBD payout, equal to 0.16 steem dollars!
    @anixio, @lynncoyle1, @jodekss, @flyyingkiwi, @seesladen, @giddyupngo, @oivas, @tristancarax, @brisby, @wonderwop, @antimetica, @calluna, @gwilberiol, @pixiehunter..

.. see you all tomorrow with another story and a rich pot of 4 @steembasicincome shares!



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For those that want to join the fun, here is how this contest works:


1. You receive an unfinished fiction story or a script.

2. You finish it with your own post or a comment in the comment section. A limit of 500 words is recommended.

3. YOU WIN! 4 @steembasicincome shares to the writers with the best ending.

It's so simple and, most of all, we'll enjoy our fiction ideas!
Nothing is mandatory here, but voting and resteeming is highly appreciated!



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What's next?



I will run 1 round of this contest next Wednesday 11th July, 1:00 PM, GMT+7 (U.S. West Coast time zone). The result will be out on Tuesday 17th July, avg. 14:00 PM GMT+7 (U.S. West Coast time zone). Submission deadline: Monday 16th July, 12:00 PM, GMT+7 (U.S. West Coast time zone)

If you like this contest.. SUSTAIN THE INITIATIVE and SPREAD THE GOSPEL! I'm grateful for your resteeming and word of mouth. The purpose of this initiative is to enhance creativity while distributing wealth and create a fiction workshop of friends. Everything helps to make us grow together!


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Bananafishiously excellent, indeed! Thanks Marco for the huge sponsorship!

Oh wow that you so much and that people liked my story. It was an awesome first part and I wanted to do some justice to it and I am so happy that people saw the vision I had in my mind's eye.

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Thank you for appreciating my first part, bud.. I'm curious to know the opinion of you all about this one coming.

Congratulations to all the winners, the endings were fabulous and I'm just happy I didn't have to choose the winners. Great job @f3nix 👌

Yo Bruni! Thank you man, don't miss this one coming.. it's time for some blood and skulls ✌️

Thank you, @f3nix! I love Bananafish

LOL what a funny gif Nancy 😂 see you soon!

Thank you! Fun reading everyone's ideas. Looking forward to next week...see if I can come up with something to contribute.

It's going to be in the fantasy genre, with more dialogues.. this time we try our pen on dialogues. It's great to have you writing with us.. your stories are always a good reading ✌️

Congratulations to the winners of the contest. Hopefully we'll get more crazier and funny entries to go along with the prompts every week.

Ditto man! Let's try an alchemic ritual.. or ask the shuhala things.

Hey sorry I didn't get around to an entry, but I'm making another effort on your new one tomorrow. The road to hell is paved with good intentions blah blah blah :)

I will continue to put it in any Discord channel I can and help spread the word for you regardless :)

Congratulations to all of the winners here too!!

No sense of guilt, dear @lynncoyle1! We're just a safe harbor where you can always dock and share your pirate adventures..see you in today's post, cheers!

happy to participate. Thanks for the contest and congrats to the other winners.

Happy to enjoy your writing, @dirge!

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This post was shared in the Curation Collective Discord community for curators, and upvoted and resteemed by the @c-squared community account after manual review.

Thanks for the support @c-squared!

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