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RE: Win 1.5 SBDs in VDux's Haiku Contest About Horror (just in time for Valentine's Day)
Un Tierno Presente
Este día especial
tu hermoso cadáver
será un presente.
This special day
your beautiful corpse
will be a present.
Hi! First and last lines are too long, can you fix?
Ok, I accepted because a syllable counter will fit but I don't know any English dialects that would pronounce those words with the exact proper syllables for the English version. As always GREAT to get your haiku!