You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: VDUX Happy Haiku Contest!!!View the full contextchrislyr (62)in #contest • 6 years ago (edited)Okay I'm back! Title: Smiles that vanquish all lies Hide not those smiles Let them be seen for miles Vanquishing all lies https://busy.org/@chrislyr/haiku-smiles-that-vanquish-liez
Cool! Change to "Let them be seen for miles" to fit 7 syllable 2nd line?
Okay, I did what you suggest but there seemed to be only 6 syllables in line 2?
Mea culpa. Ugh. You were right all along.
Did you to leave your smile on this post?
unless miles is said in Cali slang which makes it two syllables
Mi uls