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@caleblailmusic,
It's hard to pack a punch with just 199 words, but it would be a scene in a feature length movie huh? Lol
Thanks
@Lymmerik

You're welcome! I think you did very well, considering the (oddly specific) word constraint!

@caleblialmusik,
This contest it, in my opinion the best short story contest on Steemit. It is a challenge to fit in all the necessary elements for a story. Thanks again!
@Lymmerik

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