Thanks a lot man, great constructive feedback, and you know what I had about 40 words left, so I could have finished it out better for sure.. I'm really looking forward to taking part again soon.. I'm away on holidays for a couple of weeks soon, so going to park Steemit while I'm away, so I can dedicate all my time to the family... Hope to try another one of these soon after I get back, as I really enjoyed this one :o)