Hmm. This was rather hard to understand. I couldn't tell who was talking at what time and who all was included in the conversation.
One mom, her child, and...?
It started out as if there were two people discussing the idea of having children, then all of a sudden there was a child speaking. Were they out in the park?
I like the theme of the story, but definitely was hard to understand..

Thank you very much for your entry.