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RE: BIG FAMILY for Constrained Writing Contest #24
Are you certain you proof-read your work?
Or is this how you wanted it to look/read?
Other than that, your story carries a powerful message about "real" and "fake" love. One being unconditional, and the other just for benefits/profit.
Speaking of which... Is there any chance I could get my hands on some of those rejuvenating potions you mentioned?
Thank you very much for your entry. ^^