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RE: Stranger than Facebook, my entry for the 11th Constrained Writing contest
I am not well versed in fiction. Sorry!
OK so in my world I am thinking this story is about a narrator who hears a voice who ends up being a real person, who is Emma, who narrates the last paragraph. Got it? I appreciate that you read it!!!
Hmm... Now I have a hard time understanding the last paragraph... >:/ May I ask you to try and elaborate further? :3
Absolutely! so Emma is a professor, so she is talking out loud in the last part. I brought a roster -for example - refers to her list of students. She is basically in that moment introducing herself to a new set of students (including the first narrator). I think I should have used quotations in one part though.
I began, my words circling...
That is not in quotes. The other part, "Oh, good to meet you...." is supposed to be in quotes.
I had the last paragraph in bold. But I am new and it didn't work somehow. I need to research bold I guess.
you can do bold by putting 2 stars in front and behind text, like this:
** Test **, but without the spaces..
that is kind advice! awesome
Ooooh, now I understand.. Thanks! :D
Quite an emotional rollercoaster for the narrator! :o
well in the long version she doesn't end up killing anyone. But thanks for thinking about my narrator. At least I apparently did make her into a solid character. :)
I'm very happy to see you've tried yourself in fiction! :D It's exactly what this contest is about! :D stepping out of your comfort zone ^^
and since I stepped so far maybe I could win! :) do I still have a chance?
Hweeeeell :P Everybody has an equal chance at winning before the contest ends and I declare winners :P That's the best answer I can give you ;D
I know. I know. :) Thanks though.
I guess I could have made a simple first narrator. It might have been easier. I also enjoy Virginia Wolf. :)