The Man in Black

in #conflictprompt7 years ago

Hot midday sun streamed through dusty windows as the saloon doors swung open. A man dressed in black strolled in and walked up to the bar.

“Whiskey.”

“Coming right up, Sheriff.” The barkeep pulled down a bottle of the good stuff and grabbed a clean tumbler.

The Sheriff tilted up his black hat and grabbed the glass. He leaned against the bar and looked around the room. His mean snarl melted into a grin.

“Billy, you dumb drunk. Bit early to be drinking?” The Sheriff nodded at a young man posted up at the bar.

“I’d say the same to you, Sheriff,” Billy hoisted up a glass of booze. “To the law,” he said and drank the liquor, letting it linger in his mouth, the bitter taste a welcome gift. The alcohol warmed his belly and doubled his courage.

The Sheriff walked over to Billy. He stretched back his shoulders, towering over the kid. Gulping down his own drink he said, “Yes. ‘To the law,’ Billy. You really ought to clean yourself up. Looking like a goddamn disgrace.”

All eyes were now fixed on the two men; the man in black and the blond, drunk kid. Billy pointed his finger at the Sheriff’s head. He cocked back his thumb, “Click. Boom.”

The Sheriff knocked Billy's hand out of his face. “I’m getting real sick of your attitude, kid.”

“I’m getting sick of you always buggin’ me. Leave me alone.”

“Now it ain’t that simple, Billy. This place needs order, it needs rules, and it needs a hierarchy. You see, I’m at the top of that hierarchy and you...” the Sheriff looked down on the floor. “You are the dirt beneath my boots.”

Face turning beet red, Billy looked into his glass. The Sheriff’s loud laugh rang throughout the room, specks of spittle flying out of his face.

“That’s a good boy Billy. Now you know your place.” The Sheriff patted Billy’s shoulder as he made his way to the door.

Billy gulped down the rest of the booze, not letting it linger this time. He threw the empty glass. It hit the Sheriff in the back of the head.

“Oh, Billy. You shouldn’t have done that.” The Sheriff bent down to grab his hat.

“Let’s settle this like men.”

The Sheriff grinned, putting his hat back on. “Yes, Billy. Let’s.”

The two men walked outside, Billy following the Sheriff. The patrons poured out of the bar after them. The Sheriff took his time walking to the end of the dirt road. A shot rang out. The Sheriff crumpled to one knee, grasping at his pistol. Another shot. The Sheriff hollered grabbing at his arm, letting his pistol fall. Billy walked up to the man on the ground, kicking his pistol aside.

“B-Billy that wasn’t fair.”

“You ain’t ever treated me fair.”

Billy cocked back the hammer, pointing the gun at the Sheriff’s head. Crows and vultures dotted the buildings. Everyone watched. A shot. The birds flew up into the sky.


This is my entry for the Fictioneers Writing Contest.

Thank you to these fine Writers' Block members for making editing suggestions:
@jrhughes
@jonknight
@tinypaleokitchen

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Great read! I didn't realize there was another western floating around the Writer's Block around the same time I was writing mine. Mine is a different spin on the western genre, but it was a fun experiment which I think I'll repeat. I'll be watching to see if you continue this one as well.

Thank you @aksounder going to go read yours now.

Thanks for attending Thursday’s Pimp Your Post Thursday @cizzo. I have written a post to share your featured post from last night. Just stopping back to let you know that you can see your [name in lights](https://steemit.com/pypt/@shadowspub/pimp-your-post-thursday-report-from-october-26th) right here. (Just kidding about the lights :)

Thank you for including it and hosting the show, I will be back :) @shadowspub

Great to have you there @cizzo ... and good material you shared with us

Excellent writing....I love men in black :P

Thank you and glad you liked it :) @battleaxe

I'm really diggin the story. More please!!

And what happen next? Do we have the blond drunken Billy as the new sheriff?

Up to your interpretation :)

Sheriff had it comin'. Then again, Billy has it comin' too, just a little bit down the road...
Enjoyed this story!

Glad you liked it@jonknight and thanks again for the great suggestions!

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Love it. Great story @cizzo. I'm sure Billy will have it coming to him sooner rather than later!

Glad you enjoyed it @g-force1980 :)

Love it. Great story @cizzo. I'm sure Billy will have it coming to him sooner rather than later!

Excellent writing....I love men in black :P

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