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RE: Fiction Comp - Entrants submissions for judging - #1 Week 2
@kyrios I am glad that I got to read your assessments before you removed them all. I stand guilty of my intent to have to lead the reader down a path and to deliver him/her naked to the world that is different from what he/she may think to know.
I did my job to bring one on a journey. The destination is up to the reader to decide as the same rules of his/her world do not wholly apply. To this end, I did not betray the reader. I seduced him/her with imagination. Clothes then become optional.
@aedroberts, thanks for your input. I understand that and to be honest my apologies in case my comment did you any disservice. I had no such intentions.
@kyrios Please trust me as you did me ZERO disservices. I was chuckling as your critique made me go, "That was what I wanted to do." It would be the same if you or someone else called me a dreamer. Yeah (Snick! Snick!) tell me something that I do not already know.
I would never receive five or six category 10/10s simply because I am off center. People on YouTube give thumbs down to Pink Floyd songs. What's a mother to do? She can dress the kids and send them off to school, but they will still come home with the skinned knees.