I actually think both are awesome @la-fumettista. The watercolor reminds me more of a children's book illustration while the new one has more of a cinematography vibe. Your drawing skills are what makes you good in any medium ;) I don't see any mistake either :s
Thank you! Yeah I even had that thought when I was writing this post, the first one definitely has a children's book vibe. It's always fun experimenting with different mediums.