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RE: INVITATION: Collaborative Art Journey..."DROPS OF MATTER" No. 38 --- This is your invitation to Collaborate! Whatever your expression, BRING IT ON!
I'm in the journey early, no hurry or worries :) my friend @everlove
YES YES YES!!!! It's another amazing contribution by @verbal-d. You just made my week!
In the midst of tribulation
Some drop everything that matters
Spiritual beings split in to particles, dropping of matter
Hot-tempered like sun drops, unstopped when they're madder
Irrational decisions, chaotic like mad hatters
When all is thus lost, such life essence can bend, shatter
Don't let that negative energy enter thee, and then scatter...
Thank you so much my friend, I just changed the word Bend to Rend which is a much better choice seeing as Rend means to be torn or ripped in to pieces :)
Oh so clever with words!!!