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RE: 不积跬步,无以至千里

in #cn-reader7 years ago

English Version Of Today's Article by Teacher @rivalhw

Do not accumulate steps, immeasurable

Last night, in order to give a model reference to the participating partners in the upcoming "Storyteller Chinese" activity, I wrote an article titled "There are no silver three hundred and two here - listen to stories and learn Chinese," and in the remarks Wrote:

This essay is an introductory essay prepared for the forthcoming series "Listening Story Chinese", which is aimed at Chinese beginners such as children and foreigners, with short, interesting and illustrated Story form, let you easily learn Chinese, but also feel the profound and profound Chinese culture and the long history. "

After writing, I read about 500 words or so, and then read it, think the text is concise, should be suitable for beginners to read, then sent to the activities of preparatory group, would like to hear everyone's comments.

Then we come to a lot of suggestions, including a few I feel very good, for example @ moster1894 @ Jinluan recommended to increase the audio, online play; @ vivia recommended for the key words and phrases related to the internal link to facilitate readers to read the link.

@ wilhb81 also leave a message proposal can be made into a kind of e-book, because our current focus on writing and illustration creation, taking into account a lot of participating partners on markdown editing and layout grammar is not familiar with, so for the time being do not do e-books Typesetting, to be given the opportunity to consider reunification by the person to complete this work.

For the improvement of the text, Tournesol gave me a lot of suggestions, so I gain a lot in the process. For example, I originally used the word "hard-won" in the text, and Tournesol gave her opinion: The easy meaning is easy or not easy? Another example is "pragmatic", "so that others can not find out" the article appeared in the two "the" word what are the mean? What does "even" mean? What does "meditation" mean? And so on, these seem to be very common to people whose native language is Chinese, but for Chinese beginners, there may be some difficulty. Therefore, I re-edited some of the text according to the suggestion. This version is even more concise. I believe this amendment will be much easier for beginners. In fact, after Tournesol read my revised version And that's it. :)

The current illustration is already in preparation, and the audio playback part is also under preparation.

With the wide range of suggestions I have received and the changes I have made to the contents of the essay, I think it is not too difficult for you to do something. The real challenge is to find a solution to the problem. At the same time give me the biggest feeling is that things can not just do their own immersion ride think of course, to consider the object-oriented, combined with the actual situation can be better to do things.

There are a few companions who can not wait to get ready to begin. I can understand everyone's feelings. I am also looking forward to the early start of the activity. However, compared with the quality of the article, I think that it will be better for the preparatory work to be adequate. After all, Quality is the most crucial. I am looking forward to producing a batch of high-quality works, be it words or illustrations, etc., and not simply to sort it out.

This is really not a result, without limit, not plot a small stream, into Jianghai ah.

That's all from this article. All the best for the people who are learning Chinese and much appreciation for the people who are doing lot of efforts in this regard like @rivalhw. Stay blessed !

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