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RE: The Things I Do For Gertie - Flash Dystopian Fiction 500 Entry
It may sound like banter, but it's (intended to be) one of the most important lines of the piece.
The theme is dystopia, after all, but I thought I'd do away with the usual doom and gloom and write something more subtle.
oh no, i meant i enjoyed that line then questioned myself for rooting for the killer. i enjoyed your story
Thank you, it means a lot!