SHORT STORY CHALLENGE OF 50WORDS - WATER
SHORT STORY CHALLENGE OF 50WORDS - WATER
In the solitude of the river, nobody bothered them. His passion was forbidden. Elena and Carlos gave themselves to the pleasure of the water running through their bodies. Suddenly, a pale, transparent figure emerged from the water. He watched them, began to drink water while Elena and Carlos were diluted.
Forbidden loves! Why can't people listen to the warnings... and avoid solitary rivers? :)
That was an interesting read. I'm not sure of I understand all the symbolism... Maybe you can shed some light on it :o)
I'm really sorry, @yeceniacarolina! I missed commenting when you first wrote this story. I agree with @ablaze. It would be nice to hear some of your thoughts behind the story, and the meaning of the imagery.
I feel like this is a surprise horror story. Fun times.