50-word short story challenge - MONEY
50-word short story challenge - MONEY
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The money was in the suitcase. Andrew saw it from the ground. It was dirty, sore and bleeding. Beside him were two bodies, two men: they were dead. Suddenly, he remembered everything. He had to escape. He managed to get up as best he could and, when he reached the window, he remembered:
- The money.
Really interesting story, @yeceniacarolina. I might suggest a few edits for you, just to clarify. (It sounds a little bit like the money was dirty, sore and bleeding.) But great job with creating a dramatic story!
Hi, thanks for the suggestion @jayna.