The Gardener's Secret- Fifty words story contest

in #challenge • 6 years ago (edited)

The Gardener's Secret

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The Harrisons, a wealthy family hires a gardener, owned an extensive garden, the plant that the gardener was most careful was lemon. When the Harrison lemonade was prepared; They went into a deep sleep. And the gardener and the maid; they practiced rituals, invoking spirits that ended up seizing their souls forever.

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fifty word contest organized by @jayna

If you want to take a look at the publication or if you prefer to participate in the contest here I leave the link for you to participate, you are cordially invited:
https://steemit.com/challenge/@jayna/thisweeks50-wordchallengepromptandlastweeksround-up-tapxsp2pdp

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     6 years ago 

    I enjoyed your story! A few recommendations for next time:

    1. Use a new title for your post instead of the same title as the prompt post.
    2. Set your own tags instead of just using the same ones as the prompt post. This is important as the challenge post is very different from an entry in the challenge. I use the steempress tag, for example, because I publish my posts from WordPress using the steempress plugin. And I use “workshop” because I provide writing tips.

    You would want to give your post a title and tags indicating what your post is about. Your post is not a challenge post, nor does it list last week’s challenge entries, so it’s a bit confusing! 😊

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       6 years ago 

      Hi, @jayna. thanks for the correction, I appreciate it very much and I already made the corrections to be able to be in the contest with everything in order.

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       6 years ago 

      Awesome! Thank you.

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