good writeup @naijaberry, however, i think you are not using zappl in this post because zappl have limited characters , and also promo-steem is unrelated to this post coz you are not promoting steemit.

next time I advice you not to put unrelated post coz it will affect your post reward thus it will give you low value.

you can edit : writing philippines story (always use popular related tags )

wll do my best to support
keep learning
love lots ;))