An intriguing abstract and pictorial piece. Love the weave of the words as I scroll down the page.One of the limitations of this online format is that longer poems are taken in segmentally. It would nice if you had the time to see the whole poem as a single graphic. It would be quite satisfying just to look at the poem. On the words themselves, your apt use of enjambment sees to it that every stanza ends with a punch of meaning. I like that:) I think as you intended every stanza could easily stand alone as piece of brevity. Another very fine work.