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RE: Through child's eyes - micro-fiction
How interesting @jayna! I didn't know that microfiction was a thing, but I absolutely love the idea of condensing our writing into something powerful and meaningful in very few words. I guess the key is inference; to infer just enough to trigger meaning for each reader, and you managed to do just that :) Well done! I'll have to check out the contest; does it run weekly?
As an aside, I taught high school for years, and one of my students shared a memory of the year he too wondered about Santa's existence, so he chose to hide behind the couch to see what really went on. He fell asleep, but woke to a noise, peeked around the couch, only to see his father putting presents under the tree. Completely naked ;)
Hi @lynncoyle1, yes it's a weekly contest. You can see the newest one here: https://steemit.com/contest/@jayna/weekly50-wordshortstorycontestlastweekswinner-0di0et4438.
I hope you'll try it! It's great fun.
Thanks for sharing the Santa story. That is hilarious!
Thank you @jayna, I'll check it out :)
And you're welcome; that story has stayed with me for over 20 years :)
The really intense and/or funny ones will do that. I can't believe some of the things that pop into my head as being so full of color and detail, like they were yesterday. And then I think, "wait, that was over 40 years ago!"
Right?! Especially with certain triggering tastes and smells!