How Do I Fix Me
How Do I Overcome Hurdles Who Appear To Collect More Than I Have?
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Knock knock
Another Day Breaks In
Slap the clock
minutes tick hands spin
Knock knock
Afternoon far behind
Rock rock
Assignment done just in time
Knock knock
My car Starts smoking more than me
There’s a cop
I fully stopped I didn’t speed
Knock knock
Please roll your window down
Identification
He says “Hello there Miss Brown”
Knock knock
He taps the hood, he wants a look
Ok Pop
The engine- majorly cooked
Knock knock
I scoot aside buckle up the belt
Look at the clock
The most helpless I have felt
Knock knock
Babe. I can fix it. Please let me in
Please stop!
I try resisting but he wins
Knock knock
On something lucky to win
Bawk bawk
I’m such a chicken so I give in
Pressure presses
With regrets
We can’t just sit here
Makin small bets
I gotta nice one
A big sweet lovely
I got my family and the lord above me
I can’t seem to strike gold
Guess I am digging it all wrong
Digital wealthy and Yale elite
Stole my pretty shoes right off my feet.
Well, this won’t work for me
I feed a family
So take your tantrum
And move on down the street .
Kissing should feel good
Wish I could delete
My self
My self
Just undo or try control z
But doesn’t matter
What buttons you push
Only the divine
Will get to know me.
Woww...
Amazing lines once again @lorilikes.
Why if so many people go through the same thing
Are we all alone
Why if so many people feel the same pain
Do we stay at home
Why if so many people feel incapable of moving
Is there not a cure
Why does this melancholy I feel
constantly disable me to heal
I get up and out
And try a new route
Only to find myself going in circles
Same pain
No gain
The mystery remains
Why we all struggle with these emotional hurdles
A friend of mine, @joe.public, pointed out his admiration for your reply here @geek.phoenix . I agree your reply here is awesome. I want to also point out that your replies are ALWAYS greatly cherished. 🦋
Thank you again @lorilikes and @joe.public for your valuable appreciation. You guys making me more n more loved person. Thanks for your love and support.
Amazing! You are a great poet. Everyotime tou posted something incredible. Loved to read ❤️
Thank you darling.
Must try to pick some soul food. Here I got some "But doesnt matter
What bottons you push
Only the divine
Will get to know me."
Be strong lady.
I like your poetry because it makes me think.
It's also heavy sometimes. Parts of it scare me.
I want to ask questions, but not sure if they're too personal.
After all, you don't know me.
Maybe I'm just another scary stranger knock...knock...knocking...
When all you wanted was some quiet.
Time to process. Quiet time to process.
@themanwithnoname are you secretly the man with many names? Just asking. Ok so-
About the whole questions / personal stuff and worrying ... I think it’s a safe bet that I won’t mind if you ask. I am actually one of the weird people who enjoys exploring my dream and my nightmare- with an audience. Why not? I figure if prevents me from scaring my immediate loved ones because I suddenly don’t mutter under my breath any more, than ok! To clarify - I don’t mutter as much, now that I have an outlet for my love my hate my worry and my weight. Not really sure if i willl Be William to answer honestly but I am willing to hear you out and have a banter. Try me! ✨⭐️✨
I interpreted your poem as having some intense aspects to it. I wasn't sure if you were talking about personal experience or if it was fiction.
That's good not to mutter as much around close friends and family. It can scare them. Mutter around people on the internet. We're all a little crazy anyways. ;)
The thing I love about my “mutterings” online is that the only people who read them are doing so by choice! Which means it is not a nag session. Yay. People who WANT to hear from me! That’s a beautiful concept.
And crap, back to $0.000000001 votes to give out! :P
You always post the most awesome poems. I love when they rhyme like this on does and also the "beat" ... "tempo"... or what ever it's called
Does it make you wanna rap?
Lol. No. I'm definitely white.. I can't even wrap a present
I was going to start beat-boxing. Here is a little fun one about me from the past. Tap it for volume. https://twitter.com/theloribrown/status/789911788368203776
More of these please! Luv 'em! Impromptu existence :)
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Wow! This is just amazing, You are good at what You Know how to do best. And i love to read all Your write-ups
Thank you darling @Jannie. You are a good lady.
Thank you, I want to be like u when i grow up
Thank you, I want to be like u when i grow up
Knock Knock
Who says you're not enough
Tries to sell you dreams cuz you feel you're not
Nothing to undo, nothing to fix
Just be your best self- its always been enough
I loved it. Until I was wondering ... who is this body builder chick? Your reply will determine my mood for the next decade. 😮
Not sure who the body builder is, was looking for a fierce person that exudes confidence, as if to say "That's right....I totally got this". I see that level of confidence in you, in the energy of your writing. Sorry if it made it weird, maybe I missed the crux of your point in your piece?
You didn’t make it weird. I love it. You are awesome!!!
Life with no hurdles, how fun would that be?
Keep in mind that game developers intentionally keep the game hard on high levels because it boosts the fun players are having :D
Cheers
Yes and the challenge keeps the game hard to beat. Right? 😛
Of course! :D
amazing poem mam...👌 i'm become fan of your... ☺ thanks for sharing... 👍
i dont know what to say but really amazing knock knock amazing