I like the arrangement and the bit of reaggae-esqe skank you put on it, also reminiscent of the Paris cafe genre. Reminds me a little bit of Manu Chao. The patches on the synths aren't my flavor, however, there's no accounting for taste. The music is solid regardless of which "instruments" are sounding the notes. I'm not picking up on loneliness theme in the piece, but it's not a bad piece of music. Solid work.