Dude you should enter this video in Comedy Open Mic. This is hilarious! You had me laughing so hard pretty much right off the bat. And then it really starts picking up steam toward the end.

You can still enter just by editing the title of the post adding #comedyopenmic tag and nominating a couple other people - I think those are the rules - check @comedyopenmic blog for latest contest post and rules. I am positive this post would be well received with that crowd