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RE: Woven - Chapter 02 - Page 08

in #art5 years ago

And so, a dialog page, with a very classic left/right layout with both characters going back and forth and finishing with a good large panel (with more text bubbles contained in the large one, to emphasize a beat in the conversation) (LOVE it!) (<3)

It is interesting that Theo dropped the father stuff once he was reminded about the mother figure in Ayse's life... I wonder what's this all about ! Good hook, Sean <3

I also like that the ending of this page really sets up the unveiling for the reasons for the kidnapping :D Really nice~

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THANK YOU <3!!!
I'm really glad the page behaves well and that it has a good pace along with the hook.
It's about time we start to reveal a little more information ;D

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