Isn't it funny how that happens..? There's something you're uneasy about tackling, because subconsciously you kinda know it's just not going to turn out quite the way you want it to. It's so frustrating! But I think it turned out great! I just stumbled upon your page thanks to this little beauty, and I have to say I'm a huge fan of your style! Perhaps if it really bothers you, you'll try re-working it/doing a new phoenix piece?
I sometimes find that's the only way I can get that peace/satisfaction. I'll definitely be following for more gorgeous art!