RE: Nocturn Episode 9 - a Painting based Adventure Game for Steemit: "Killmoulis". 10! SBD in prizes
And while we're at it: the night of Nocturn is almost coming to a close... I have +/- 3 more episodes in store for you..
How do you like it so far? Feedback is very much appreciated!
Was the format clear and understandable when you first saw it?
Do you like the format of the adventure with the most popular option? Do you like the 'castle' or have you got suggestions for another setting? Would you like more (3, 4, 5) options? Do you want longer text? Or shorter?
As there won't be a whole lot of new episodes for Nocturn (I only have so many paintings in this series), but I would like to continue and grow this kind of game here, I'd appreciate any and all feedback.
I'm really having a blast doing this, I hope you are too, so, feel free to tell me what you like and/or dislike, thank you!
The format confused me the first time I saw it but I am a slow learner. Also I joined late so had to read the older episodes to catch up. It was confusing because the least popular option can get lost in the chat but you can't do much about that.
I like the longer text we have with the later episodes. Ep 9 is a good length for me. Plenty to think about :) The castle is fine but I'd like different settings if there are future adventures. Could be a forest with caverns, pits, hollow trees etc; an old, abandoned garage and workshop with haunted car body skeletons, scary tool racks with hanging tools ready to drop on you and a horrible pit for working under vehicles. Anyway, you know better than me what would be fun for a setting.
Two options are fine for me but more would also be fine.
I love the paintings. One day I hope to buy one. Your interpretation of Killmouris reminds me of an embryo, he he, you know, a scan before it's born.
Good news that you enjoy it all!
Hey, thank you, that's some very valuable feedback! I made the outline for this adventure on an obscure blog, but never did anything with it, really.
I do write a whole lot more story here than on that blog. Glad you enjoy the longer texts.
I think if more regular players come (which is starting to happen somewhat), I could increase the number of options, or find ways the players can interact with the storyline. Good fun, thanks again!