The Death of Hope - An original poem

in #art7 years ago (edited)

Hope has died,
of course I cried,
death is always sad,
puts you sobbing into bed...

But sometimes it can be good,
there are things that die should.
False hope is an evil,
while it's not the devil,
it still makes your mind rebel.

When false hope dies,
the heart gets a surprise:
A clarity of thought.

You've been fighting windmills for too long,
finally your heart can hear the gong.

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Wow it's true! That is very much a poem on the same theme as my REPLACEMENT https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/honesty-a-poem-by-bennettitalia

I especially liked "death is always sad/puts you sobbing into bed"

Nicely written, I enjoyed your different approach to a similar topic :)

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