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RE: Angel - Do you want to win some SBD ? POETRY OR STORY ?
he couldnt let her go but he knew the price was big
for an angel to fall for a mortal being was un heard of
but he liked her and was willing to give everything
even loosing his position among angels to be with her
and to see her live her dreams of seeing the world
and flying like a bird though she could see the world by traveling
but her fairy tale was that she had wings like a bird
and traveled every corner of the world
so he gave up her position among the angelic being
and gave her his wing so that she could live her dream
hoping that as she fly the world she would return to him
cause he loved her to give up all he valued
Deep! Nice writting, I can imagine a whole detailed story behind those words. Good job