Thank you very much for all the tips! Yes, you really pointed all the things that I wasn't happy with, I tried to fix them, but now I understand a bit more why it didn't happen. With more practice and hfollowing your tips in mind, surely will improve rapidly! I need to remember that sometimes less is more, I think I overdid on some aspects and as you mentioned I was a bit scared to play with the huge contrast in colors, because it was kinda turning out awkward.
You did a fabolous rework! It looks amazing. Thank you very much for the very helpful and constructive comment!! :)