I am not an artist, so take these comments for what they're worth. I like what you did with some of this. The piece looks better in color. I always prefer that. You gave the woman's body more definition and more of a waist. That made a huge difference.

Moving her over was a good idea, too. That makes more visual room for the menacing figure and adds to the feeling of dark drama.

I really like that you straighted out her feet and legs, she looks positively deformed (even crippled) in the original picture. That was very distracting.

The one thing I might change if it were my picture would be to add some more distinct white highlights to the dark figure's face -- like you have on the fingers of his hand. That would give it more definition. Right now, to me, it looks a little flat -- but then again, what do I know.

Thank you for including this in our post-promotion channel. It was a nice entry to include in our group post this morning.